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Wishing Well

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I whispered my dreams
Into a wishing well-
The glint of silver coins
Flashing dully under the rippling surface.

So many empty souls
Tossing coins upon the water;
In hopes of a sliver of hope.

But no one ever told me
That all you get
Is a small splash
And an echo of tarnished soul-songs,
Floating from beneath the still, still surface...

But it's never any use,
Because the heart is just a hollow muscle
That moves to stay alive.
There's not much I want to say, but most of it can't be said with words.
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RoamingBubblegum's avatar
This is great. I find it hard to set tone for my writing. I have been told it tends toward tonelessness (not a word really, I know). This is anything but toneless. It sounds as if the person is reminiscing about something a tad awful, but trying to put a somber spin on it. I don't know. I'm not very good at this. You clearly are though, so don't mind the incompetence....  

oh by the way, the Darkeness loved this :D