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whispers in my cranium

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splitting irises;
these pupils dilating rapidly into a black hole,
behind closed, locked, shackled doors.

there's a monster,
but it isn't hiding under this bed,
teeth gnashing in silent malice.
it's not even clawing at the walls of the closet.

it's awakening now,
rearing up for the strike
behind these glassy corneas.

you know,
diseases that get right into your head
take everything from you.

you don't have anything
anymore-
not even your own mind.

(i find it a shame that
no matter how thick your skull is
it still can't stop the monsters from getting in.)
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Chezzy-Am's avatar
Honestly speaking, I was talking about something on the exact same topic as this poem with one of my friends. You're right about what's written in the brackets.

Thematically, it portrayed its idea well, and I particularly like how the desperation in this poem takes on that perspective immediately and consistently. It does feel drastic, but its good for this poem.

Well done.